Thursday, December 30, 2004

The Brilliant Walk

We walk through a garden, just you and I
and I see the roses, while you see the sky
My eyes are set forward, I tell of the way
While yours watch the heavens, and speak of the day
A heart is a flower, a soul is a star
Together, we wander, we travel afar
The sunlit horizon, it dazzles as fire
And each blossom dances, and serves to inspire
We walk through a garden, just you and I
and I see the roses, while you see the sky



7 Comments:

At December 31, 2004 5:24 PM, Blogger Eddy Lee said...

Did you write this poetry or did you find on the web.

I love poetry, and I really liked this one.

 
At December 31, 2004 8:28 PM, Blogger Erin said...

I write all the poetry that's poested on here, unless otherwise stated. Thanks though, I'm glad you liked!

 
At January 03, 2005 4:07 PM, Blogger Mike said...

I love poesting poetry too! In fact, I may poest my own poetic follow-up to this here piece!

leahciM

 
At January 03, 2005 6:48 PM, Blogger Erin said...

*wonders if you're really going to post a follow-up or if that way just a lame excuse to point out my poor spelling.*

 
At January 04, 2005 11:26 PM, Blogger Phydeauxs99 said...

Very very good. You write some good stuff. All you need now to be a real poet is a barret and a bongo. I think this is really good.

 
At January 05, 2005 7:18 PM, Blogger Erin said...

why, thank you! I have a beret, and I can always borrow Aaron's hand drums! ;)

 
At June 06, 2006 11:00 AM, Blogger Meryl said...

That's tres pretty. *nods*

 

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